Spent

Wednesday, December 16, 2009 5 Comments



Sun about to rise
Travelling with all its might
Sky yearning for the first glimpse
Of her lover rushing to her side.

As he drew nearer,
She turned a bright red
When he reached for her
She yielded, little shy.

He tossed the cloud,
She wrapped around.
Locked her in her arms,
Spent, they lay together.

Came the time
For Sun to move,
Had to say their byes
Waiting for the next morn to arrive.

viji suresh

Some say he’s half man half fish, others say he’s more of a seventy/thirty split. Either way he’s a fishy bastard. Google

5 Candles:

Sweet one....

See the sky like all men is having illegal relationship with moon in the night(hee hee)

After his wife leaves

Brosreview said...

Yes, "sweet one".

Viji said...

@ ajey pls bear with me :D it needs a lots of guts to come back after almost 2-3 months of complete writer's block. n be patient with me, i swear i m trying.

@ devasena sky is a "she" here ;) i wd say it's cynical to call men that. what you call "illegal" exists in both the sides. don't you think so? women indulge too.. there is a proverb in tamil, tat says, " a clap occurs only when two palms come together"

As he drew nearer,
She turned a bright red


These 2 lines made me think that the sky is "he" and the Sun is a lady. She turned a bright red......

Viji said...

"Sky yearning for the first glimpse
Of her lover rushing to her side."

think u missed the "her"... but yeah gave me a nice idea. maybe i will write somethin around it.

wisdom comes with experience

At one, I learnt crawling was fun. At forty one, I still feel crawling is fun #blamemykneesnotme