You and Me

Wednesday, December 09, 2009 4 Comments


What would I, like the most?

To write your name, on the shore.

When the tide rise,

I lay on the write.

The feel so precious.

as your name imprinted on me,

The sand rubbed raw to feel.


Let me hold you close to my heart

Want to hold you little longer.

What are you to me?

I asked my maker one day.

Hidden beneath flesh and bones

you rest inside the tattered home.


On that day when the planets slip,

And find their beloved Sun amiss

Earth will stop at its stride,

And would die on sun's demise.


Lets live these remaining days

as if its our last day

I'm piling all these sweet moments

To live on memories till I fray.

viji suresh

Some say he’s half man half fish, others say he’s more of a seventy/thirty split. Either way he’s a fishy bastard. Google

4 Candles:

Brosreview said...

I, in particular, like the final lines. Good job!

Viji said...

thanks AJ.. they are dear to me too :)

Shadow said...

wow, this is too beautiful viji!

I like this line - hidden beneath my tattered home

Lets live these remaining days as if its our last day -too beautiful

Oh so romantic Viji..........

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