Held captive and released

Thursday, February 11, 2010 , 12 Comments



Through my dreams and reality
Wanted to grasp my fantasy.
Every step, I had to drag through
In vain, I tried reaching you...

Was there, not for long,
Held captive by your charm.
Heaven and hell took turns
Couldn't help but smile and sigh.

Only to realise,
You are a short lived bubble
The more I tried
The more you evaded..
When I lost hope,
You persuaded..

Closing my eyes, trying hard to sleep
Hope the dreams would come back to me...
Am like a prisoner, who was held captive
Now released, afraid to step out free...

Not knowing where to turn
It scares me to go back,
To the place I started,
Only to realize, I am not wanted...

Closing my eyes, trying hard to sleep
Life is nothing but a weird dream...
The more I fight, the more I lose
Want to remain, the way I had been...

I wish to God, that I could drift to sleep....
I wish to God, that I could drift to sleep....

viji suresh

Some say he’s half man half fish, others say he’s more of a seventy/thirty split. Either way he’s a fishy bastard. Google

12 Candles:

hmmm.. leaving this message says that i still follow your blog :)

Viji said...

yeah yeah... it's been ages since u left a comment :) happy you had the heart to do it now :)
But is that a comment, I wonder?

Harsha said...

"The more I tried
The more you evaded..
When I lost hope,
You persuaded.."

i liked this part..

i have not had problems sleeping, so no comments there.. all in all, a good poem..

Viji said...

Thanks Harsha..trust me u're a blessed soul :)

Brosreview said...

I could relate to this in the past. A very nice post!

Viji said...

Thanks Ajey...

rina said...

its been sometime since i last read you sis..and now i know i have missed you and your writes a lot!

i love this one so much..and yes me to want to remain,,, captive :)

Not knowing where to turn
It scares me to go back,
To the place I started,
Only to realize, I am not wanted...

What't the meaning of these lines.. not able to get

By the way, I sleep like a DEVIL. Me too like Harsha, never had any problems.
only problem is I dont have time to sleep. Otherwise anytime anywhere I can snore peacefully.

I feel that this sleep heals my pain beautifully. Everytime you get up after a siesta, u feel some dawn over you..

如此的 said...

幸福是人人都要,又怎麼可能都歸你所有?要知道這世界幸福本來就不多........................................

Viji said...

Thanks Rina :)

Viji said...

I know sleep is a blessed thing to have... not every one is fortunate :(

Viji said...

嗨 如此的....我不得不翻译不管你写,通过谷歌翻译...而且你知道它给我一个不完整的译本。我想请你用英语发表评论,这样我会读您的评论,你这样说到做到。感谢您访问我的景点,留下意见...

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