Wide awake, waiting!

Thursday, July 29, 2010 , 7 Comments

Wide awake, waiting
For the hours to go by,
Every minute, every hour
Seems to drag by...

Waiting.. not knowing
what i am waiting for.
The impregnable silence
Tearing at me.

Wishing for pain,
Wishing for joy,
To break the monotony
To tear apart the darkness..

Wide awake, waiting
For the hours to go by,
Every minute, every hour
Seems to drag by...

Wish for a hand
To shake me awake.
Stretching my hands
From below the current.

I'm slipping by,
I'm sucked in,
A dark never ending tunnel
No light, no life...

Wide awake, waiting,
For the hours to go by,
Every minute, every hour
Seems to drag by...

viji suresh

Some say he’s half man half fish, others say he’s more of a seventy/thirty split. Either way he’s a fishy bastard. Google

7 Candles:

rina said...

sudeep once said, waiting is the most cruel of all pains..i believe him..

wonderful write sis! :)

Viji said...

thanks rina :)

sri said...

Yes Viji! it really happens. We wait for an hour , a day even a year...Good thoughts...Viji

Namita said...

Nice one Viji.. But why such a depressing poem? :(

Opaque said...

Waiting demands trust and patience.

Viji said...

thanks Vidya :)
nami smiles to you :)will write a humorous cheerful one for you...
exactly Ajey... waiting makes life exciting.. its a painful pleasure... one need to experience "waiting" to feel this.

pain of waiting.. what can i say, its a really well written piece..
but it sounds sad dear

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