Detached "YOU"!

Friday, August 06, 2010 7 Comments


Funny to watch your, "detached YOU",
Who strolled out, to take a look at 'you'...

My folded arms praying for release,
Counting the minutes and seconds that reeled,
Didn't feel the pain, when the claws dug at...
Didn't feel the pain, when memories tugged...
Felt an happiness engulfing my self,
Pain a mandatory part in itself.
I was grateful, I was out and alive,
Whilst can't help but wonder aside,
Is that a dream, I had yesterday?
With no footprints left, to trace the day?

Funny to watch your, "detached YOU",
Who strolled out, to take a look at 'you'...

viji suresh

Some say he’s half man half fish, others say he’s more of a seventy/thirty split. Either way he’s a fishy bastard. Google

7 Candles:

Real Me said...

You can only do so much to feel them attached again. But, if they choose to leave without a hint, respect their decision and wish the best for them.

Viji said...

@ajey hmmm. I know i should.

Real Me said...

Just making sure whether you are receiving my e-mails on my latest posts. If you are interested to read them, drop in sometime.

Viji said...

I receive the e-mails Ajay. life been little hectic recently and thanks for being patient.. Please trust me, when I say this. I will read every post of yours. Bear with me for a while.
God bless you dear!

apt picture and sad...really different one..

may be you are missing me too much.. all ur poems reflect a sad note and pain in it -:)

dont worry i will come soon(hee hee)

Viji said...

come soon Devs... missing you :) that's what is wrong and sadness is a beautiful feeling too, when you are heart is heavy and feel the pain, it reminds you that you are alive and kicking ;)

wisdom comes with experience

At one, I learnt crawling was fun. At forty one, I still feel crawling is fun #blamemykneesnotme