tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5350113479595049605.post3059226854094851726..comments2024-03-10T09:48:55.544+05:30Comments on Viji unplugged: Yoga - meditating minds and cornered thoughtsVijihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08464183724160979232noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5350113479595049605.post-61734990112338573672010-08-07T18:16:21.187+05:302010-08-07T18:16:21.187+05:30@devs taste differs... if you ask me i liked the b...@devs taste differs... if you ask me i liked the beginning and the middle more than the end, but wanted to keep it light... happy that you liked the ending :)Vijihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08464183724160979232noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5350113479595049605.post-11136822378007472292010-08-04T11:09:56.585+05:302010-08-04T11:09:56.585+05:30I saw the hands stretched at her sides,
Legs folde...I saw the hands stretched at her sides,<br />Legs folded; back held straight,<br />He watched her, swallowing fast, <br />I watched him, with eyes aghast. <br /><br />I actually liked the ending -:). I feel it has given it a humour touchDevasena Hariharanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02953987349201122603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5350113479595049605.post-85439368201154673812010-08-01T13:22:32.373+05:302010-08-01T13:22:32.373+05:30@ Ajey i started this poem not with a light note, ...@ Ajey i started this poem not with a light note, wanted it to be mystical, but half way through it became light and I didn't do anything about it... hence the good beginning and not so good ending :) <br />I should thank you for your subtle comment...Vijihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08464183724160979232noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5350113479595049605.post-30135814444441195192010-08-01T02:45:47.594+05:302010-08-01T02:45:47.594+05:30Good beginning!Good beginning!Opaquehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01673267899145564334noreply@blogger.com