tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5350113479595049605.post7221206687127589828..comments2024-03-10T09:48:55.544+05:30Comments on Viji unplugged: Walk awayVijihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08464183724160979232noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5350113479595049605.post-74963398884969416652010-01-11T16:02:06.339+05:302010-01-11T16:02:06.339+05:30thank you lovely rina :) thanks for bearing with m...thank you lovely rina :) thanks for bearing with me and being with me...Vijihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08464183724160979232noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5350113479595049605.post-13386150753850583852010-01-08T17:07:52.416+05:302010-01-08T17:07:52.416+05:30hehe...
funny nice sis...hehe...<br /><br />funny nice sis...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07545959292382427553noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5350113479595049605.post-68659756385720992010-01-08T03:39:02.900+05:302010-01-08T03:39:02.900+05:30This is nicely done Viji. Welcome back! And, keep ...This is nicely done Viji. Welcome back! And, keep such nice poems coming!!!Opaquehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01673267899145564334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5350113479595049605.post-21884563400909839862010-01-07T21:18:15.931+05:302010-01-07T21:18:15.931+05:30hey shiv... my pleasure that you left a comment he...hey shiv... my pleasure that you left a comment here... honestly your poem is better than mine I should say :) <br /><br />Willfully I !left it incomplete.. and you are so sweet that you gave a beautiful ending to it :) sweet sweet lines :) loved it..loved it!!Vijihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08464183724160979232noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5350113479595049605.post-15634241382408418332010-01-07T11:32:13.336+05:302010-01-07T11:32:13.336+05:30Yay! Viji's back!
Love your poem! (So you do ...Yay! Viji's back!<br /><br />Love your poem! (So you do take morning walks, eh?!?) ;)<br /><br />And here's my little attempt at extending it:<br /><br /><i><b><br />...<br />...<br /><br />I place my feet upon the prints<br />Etched on earth by yours and their sprint;<br />I close my eyes to enter a trance,<br />Now in your arms at a ball-room dance...<br /><br /><br />A cold hand's touch wakes me in shiver...<br />I turn around, pink - it's you I'm near!<br />I feel an arrow from Cupid's quiver;<br />My eyes bat the words "I love you my dear!"<br /><br /></b></i>Shivsuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09988551726947624500noreply@blogger.com