Not dumb... but tired

Thursday, March 26, 2009 , 12 Comments



In a sea full of sharks
was trapped a silly little shad
looked around trying to move
as the shark came chasing through
he tried finding his legs to run
forgot he is a water gun
felt for his wings
to fly with a spring
found that he aint the arctic tern
furious he was not a water fern
to float without straining a muscle
bobbing sideways with a mussel
a simple fish who forgot to swim
not dumb, but too tired to think...

viji suresh

Some say he’s half man half fish, others say he’s more of a seventy/thirty split. Either way he’s a fishy bastard. Google

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Viji said...

i know it sounds pretty silly :) but wrote this to see a little smile on my friend's face... :)

Brosreview said...

Hehe, this not only makes you chuckle but also feel sorry for the "dumb" one. Nice work!!! Keep writing!!! And, thanks for visiting my spot and commenting on some of my songs. Cheers!!!

After reading your comment here, I got it. I must say that I'm getting to like poetry now.

Viji said...

Ajey thank you so much :) all of us have 24 hrs a day.. but how do u manage to write so much and also find time to visit blogs, read and comment... i'm amazed... not that i dont have time, but stuck in a whirlpool. work, home, kid, kitchen, cleaning n maybe bloggin during weekends, if muse is kind enough to sit on my shoulders :D nice to note that you pursue your passion..am very happy for you...
sorry sob story:)

Viji said...

Vandya, you said you wanted to try your hand in poetry too... waiting for that... thank you for dropping in. when you see poem as something beyond you then it is precisely that... but as you develop a love for it it's like wine that goes to your head.Read this...

Song: To Celia

"Drink to me only with thine eyes,
And I will pledge with mine:
Or leave a kiss but in the cup,
And I'll not look for wine".

see...how sweet this poem is?

Brosreview said...

@Viji - "but how do u manage to write so much and also find time to visit blogs, read and comment"

Thanks to my mum, I am pretty good at managing my time. But, let me credit you for managing both housekeeping, work and child care; that's a whole different league. And, I believe only women can handle that much.

Yea, I have been busy. But, I believe that others who manage to visit my blog on a regular basis enjoy and comment on my posts. So, deserve a visit from me, don't you think so?

That's a boosting factor, in my opinion.

Chriz said...

i feel like this everymorning.. i wake up at 6 am.. but i get out of bed at 9..

lovely thought flow..

Viji said...

thank you chriz...lucky you...

Viji said...

stands chided Ajey :( not talking abt a child here, 13 yr old boy, am always at wrong.. he runs a blog too. Ani(rudh)is his name...

Brosreview said...

@Viji - Teens are always... you know what, hehe. I was one too. Well, what's his blog called? I shall visit him.

Viji said...

I was one too... but a sweet one and trouble none :D
http://anirudh-fantasy.blogspot.com/

Brosreview said...

@Viji - I am sure you were. I am heading to your son's blog now. Cheers!!!

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