VIOLENT whispers

Saturday, April 03, 2010 5 Comments






Am waiting at the other end of the table
Wondering what you are thinking about
I could hear your whispers
Reaching me, seeking me out.

Tumultuous whispers passing heads
Singled me and seem to say
"You are more to me, than I would admit
Come with me and let's make music."

Thrown off guard, I looked at you
Your slanted smile, said aloud
"You heard me right, come to me,
Let's take a walk along the Shaded trees."

A part of me rose from the chair
Another part stayed back
Whenever I looked at you
You were looking at me.
And, should I say, I often looked your way?

It's strange that I had never
Heard you speak
Yet your voice throbbed
Inside me.

I felt a shiver, when your whispered
Entered every pore of mine
I was staggered at the way
Every thirsty pore, absorbed with might.

Your smile seemed to widen,
As I struggled to keep a cool posture.
My skin started to breathe your fragrance in
And the raised goose bumps, bringing chill.

We ran in the midst of tall green grasses
Your hands stretched to gather me to your side
I knew your trick and fought harder
The more I fought, the more I pined
For you to catch me and hold me to your side.

You stopped chasing
And I turned to your side
Started to walk, my hands tied
I knew my fate lie on your hands.

Take me as a prisoner
Or make me your queen
Trust me; I am a witch
Gives as good as I seek...

viji suresh

Some say he’s half man half fish, others say he’s more of a seventy/thirty split. Either way he’s a fishy bastard. Google

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Brosreview said...

A very apt title! Nice one!

Viji said...

Thanks Ajey!

very captivating one Viji! Nice thought and sequence of words.

Super dooper girl!

Thrown off guard, I looked at you
Your slanted smile, said aloud
"You heard me right, come to me,
Let's take a walk along the Shaded trees."

This one and next stanza is really good Viji. Your heart flutters and gives away your emotions.

By the way, ur profile photo is beautiful(maybe I should admit, sigh)

Viji said...

devs :) you made my day and thanks for the compliment :D

wisdom comes with experience

At one, I learnt crawling was fun. At forty one, I still feel crawling is fun #blamemykneesnotme